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:iconkarohemd:
I love the light in this, there's just enough light on the "dark side" of your face so it doesn't drown but there's just a little too much on the "light side" of your nose, a bit of exposure recovery should fix this. There's also just enough light on your hair on that side.
The eyes are very clear and are well placed within the crop.
The shades and tones are very nice over all.
For *my taste*the crop is a little too tight and the strand of hair across your forehead is a little distracting but those are minor things.
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:iconseanjhalpin:
you have beautiful eyes..

so many people have nice eyes on here. :)

sigh.
:icon1pixart:
i like this... so many stories in your portrait

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:iconseanjhalpin:
i could look at this for HOURS..


anyone have a map?
:iconlostimages:
Another beautiful portrait but I think that focus could be a little better on your eyes.. The light is excellent. :nod:

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• Emerson Barbosa •
:iconmarshmallowblue:
Yeah, it seemed to focus on my eyebrows more than my eyes. I was disappointed. =P
:iconlostimages:
Try it again. ;)

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• Emerson Barbosa •
:icongmcref:
enjoying your gallery

you are very photogenic & have a great eye for great shots

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May 8
413 KB
93.7 KB
800×1200

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Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
1/13 second
F/4.0
25 mm
400
May 7, 2009, 6:38:31 PM

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